We are learning to
put passion into our writing and make it more exciting to read.
Today we got to try a peace of chocolate and then we had to write what we
felt,Smelt,see and tasted then we had to put it into a description.My favorite part was eating it and putting it into the description.
Attempt 1: When miss Kee was braking the delicious chocolate up into the bowl my mouth was drenched with saliva just like a waterfall. now we get to take a piece of chocolate out of the bowl!!! I am extremely excited.I smelt caramel and dark runny chocolate cake streaming with runnynis.I saw a brown piece of mystery staring at me with its square eyes.I now pick up the peace of mystery and take it into my mouth.I taste smiley gooey chocolate and it stuck to the roof of my mouth.When I ate it felt like a gooey worm sticking to the top of my mouth.
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Attempt 2:When miss Kee was braking the delightful chocolate up into the bowl my mouth was drenched with saliva just like a waterfall. now we get to take a piece of chocolate out of the bowl!!! I am extremely excited.I smelt caramel and dark runny chocolate cake streaming with runnynis.I saw a brown piece of mystery staring at me with its square eyes.I now pick up the peace of mystery and take it into my mouth.I taste slimey gooey chocolate and it stuck to the roof of my mouth.When I ate it felt like a gooey worm sticking to the top of my mouth.
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Attempt 3:When miss Kee was braking the delightful chocolate up into the bowl my mouth was drenched with saliva just like a waterfall. now we get to take a piece of chocolate out of the bowl!!! I am extremely excited.I smelt caramel and dark runny chocolate cake streaming with runniness. I saw a brown piece of mystery staring at me with its square eyes.I now pick up the peace of mystery and take it into my mouth.I taste slimy gooey chocolate and it stuck to the roof of my mouth.When I ate it felt like a gooey worm sticking to the top of my mouth. I feel were they engraved and I also feel hard bumpiness and smooth grittiness.
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Attempt 4:
When miss Kee was braking the delightful chocolate up into the bowl my mouth was drenched with saliva just like a waterfall. now we get to take a piece of chocolate out of the bowl!!! I am extremely excited.I smelt caramel and dark runny chocolate cake streaming with runniness. I saw a brown piece of mystery staring at me with its square eyes.I now pick up the peace of mystery and take it into my mouth.I taste slimy gooey chocolate and it stuck to the roof of my mouth.When I ate it felt like a gooey worm sticking to the top of my mouth. I feel were they engraved and I also feel hard bumpiness and smooth grittiness.
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Attempt 5:
When miss Kee was braking the delightful chocolate up into the bowl my mouth was drenched with saliva just like a waterfall. now we get to take a piece of chocolate out of the bowl!!! I am extremely excited.I smelt caramel and dark runny chocolate cake streaming with runniness. I saw a brown piece of mystery staring at me with its square eyes.I now pick up the peace of mystery and take it into my mouth.I taste slimy gooey chocolate and it stuck to the roof of my mouth.When I ate it felt like a gooey worm sticking to the top of my mouth. I feel were they engraved and I also feel hard bumpiness and smooth grittiness.
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