Here is 2 haiku poems that I made about sustanibility.
1.
Keep the earth healthy.
People don’t litter rubbish.
Look after the earth.
Look after the world.
Try not to use plastic bags.
It can help the world.
Monday, 30 October 2017
Haiku Poem
At the start of this term have have been learning about all different types of poems and my favourite one that we have been learning about was haiku poems. For haiku poems it has 3 sentences all together and the first sentence has 5 syllables and the second has 7 and then the last has 5.
2.
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Hi Natalia,
ReplyDeleteI am Caroline. I am a year 8 currently attending to St Pius X Catholic School. I really the way you a creative with your poem! My favourite poem is the 2nd one. Keep it up Natalia!
Kind Regards,
Caroline
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DeleteThank you for your comment, Caroline
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Hi Natalia,
ReplyDeleteCool haiku poem. I really like how you have put heaps of detail into your poems and really thought about them. Maybe next time at the bottom of your post you could write something like please leave me a positive, thoughtful helpful comment to help me move forward with my learning to get people to comment on your post. Anyways great job!