This week in our must dos we had to write two story's from a photo and it could be made up. Here is one of my story's that done. But I still think it could be worked on.
Once upon a time there was some people at the park one day there were some kids there enjoying themselves having lots of excitement. Then they went around some trees and saw something very strange… It was this
imperceptible type dragon thing, they were amazed it was like the size of a baby bird and it was so cute. They stayed at the park for few hours and they were playing with the dragon. Then at the end of the day they kept the dragon and took her home. They named her Bella dragon. Then they lived happily ever after.
Overall here is my story and please please a positive, thoughtful and helpful comment below.
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